Tuesday, 24 August 2021

My Literacy poem using alliteration

 LIVING LIFE IN LOCKDOWN


Waiting, wishing and watching warriors 

Calling, complaining, cards and cleaning

Playing playstation, pies and praying

Sleeping, shopping, sunshine and showering

Netflix, Nachos, Noodles and NRL

Happy, Hopeful

Anxiously awaiting

Freedom and Friends


By Noah


6 comments:

  1. Ka pai Noah. I love poetry! My lockdown would have to be W - working, walking, writing... Was it challenging to come up with so many words starting with the same letter? Have you tried any other types of poems?

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  2. Awesome work Noah. Love the use of the different letters & your feelings. Great job keep up the blogging.

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  3. Fabulous work Noah. It’s great to see your work and how beautifully you have presented it.
    Look forward to seeing more.....
    Stay safe in your bubble,
    From Mrs Mackenzie 😎

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  4. Kia ora Noah, your poem really reflects the many different feelings being experienced throughout this most recent lockdown. Your use of alliteration is very effective. Keep up the positive attitude towards your online learning. :-)

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  5. Awesome post Noah!

    Your use of alliteration is great and it shows that you chose your words carefully to fit your poem!
    I can relate to watching Netflix during lock down. Have you started any good shows?
    How are your card games going?

    Keep up the awesome work :)

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  6. Talofa lava Noah. What a great way of summing up your life in lockdown in this poem. Your poem is pleasant, priceless and phenomenal. Keep up the good work Noah.

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