Friday 5 November 2021

Narrative writing.

For writing this week we had to create a Fantansy  Text based on a morphed animal we created. My animal is called a Gorllird and his name is Tonkins. It's called a Gorillid because it is a Gorilla and a bird in one.

Heres my fantasy story:



Tonkins Saves The Day





Once upon a time, there was a Gorillird named Tonkins who didn’t know that he had a super power or that there were other Gorillirds. It was early in the morning and he had just woken up. He did his normal morning routine, brushing his teeth, eating breakfast and then he would explore the forest. While he was  exploring  the forest, his muscles were becoming bigger and stronger every single day.

Tonkins muscles were getting out of control! It was like he was turning into the hulk! He finally calmed down but he was too scared that people would think he was a monster, so he decided to go back home. He ran as fast as he could so nobody would see him. But when he was about to arrive home he could hear people who sounded just like him and were shouting out for help so he went to have a look.

As Tonkins arrived, he was shocked to see other Gorillirds just like him. He saw them getting abducted by aliens! He tried to jump up onto the UFO and he ended up jumping so high and discovered that he has another Super power. He then realised he could use his powers to bring down the UFO. He used all of his strength to come down hard onto the UFO which damaged it and then caused it to crash. 

Tonkins saved the day and rescued the other Gorillirds from the aliens.


The end

By Noah

5 comments:

  1. What a cool narrative with super sentences and a great story line. Ka pai! Your morphed animal, Tonkins, used his talents well to look after his community. Super proof reading too! Awesome mahi, Noah. You constructed a well written narrative. Have another great week.

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  2. Ka pai Noah. What a cool looking animal, I just had to open up this blog post. Is there a bit of zebra in there too? Maybe you could tell your readers how you created your animal? I'm sure others would love to have a go!

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  3. That’s one scary looking creature Noah! I would not like to meet him! But what a creative story you have written. I am so pleased to see how your writing and reading is progressing. Keep up the great work and keep blogging...I really enjoy seeing your work. 👏🤩
    From Mrs Mackenzie

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  4. Hello Noah, My name is Yahya from New Windsor School. This is not good... It's better than good! Keep up that awesome work :D My favourite part of this story is when Tonkins saves all the other Gorillid's from that UFO. See you later!

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